Power always corrupts the one who holds it.
Adolf
Hitler. Saddam Hussein. Joseph Stalin. What do these three men have in common? Corruption.
Cruel, harsh, stone cold corruption; enabled and brought forth by.... power.
But these men are not the only ones who have used their power to the
disadvantage of others; not by far. It is
common knowledge that through the ages countless leaders have fallen to the
dishonorable practice of exploiting their power. These men, who were
supposed to have had our best interests at heart, did quite the opposite of
help us. Instead they abused their
endowment terribly. Could they not help themselves? Did they have these hideous goals in mind before
coming into a position of power? Why
must they have used their power so irresponsibly? With these questions in mind, is power
honestly a good thing for our leaders to have?
To find
out whether or not people such as Hitler could have helped themselves, we must
analyze how a want or need for power arises.
Usually a need or want comes from wanting to change something, or a
person may feel compelled to overcome a problem. In other words, they feel they must create
their own happiness. Or, someone with a weak
self-image may be convinced that they must use power to bolster
themselves. These thoughts may come from
an over-passionate point of view, overbearing contempt, or possibly a lack in
mental capacity; the person seeking this power might not be "all
there". The corruption tumbles, or
rather, slams, into play when a person in power begins to let virtues and self-desires
rise above the actual necessities of reality.
But where do these thoughts
come from? Wanting to create a certain,
powerful image, that is what. As well as
out of greed; it might be for money, global recognition, or merely for the want
of control. So can people avoid
corruption while in power? Sure, some definitely
can. But others....maybe not.
Now you
are wondering, did these people have their corrupt intentions in the limelight from
the moment they stepped into the power shoes?
For some, probably. But the more
likely answer is no, and there is a reason
for this. You see, there are two
different types of power: Socialized and Personalized. Socialized power is used to benefit others,
while Personalized power is used for personal gain. Corruption occurs when the P.P.
dominates. When a leader comes into
power, their intendment is, in all likelihood, more socialized than personalized. But as time wears on, these same leaders can
eventually beguile themselves into thinking
they are working for the "greater good", when they are actually committing
acts of wrong. Or, their earlier goals
of actual helpfulness start to grow a little fuzzy, therefore allowing room for
more self perceived motives. Out of
which arises the belief that the rules do not apply to them, as they are the
leader: "It is okay for me because
I have my people's best interests at heart". As well, some leaders begin to do things just
because they know they can get away with it - and the followers think what they
are doing is okay because they are "the leader". So, as you can now see, most leaders do not
have their corrupt intentions from the get-go, but due to the sweetness of
power, they eventually, over time, subconsciously submit themselves to such
thoughts.
So do
we, as people - the ones who suffer at the hands of corrupt governments -
really think our leaders should hold power?
After looking at how power breeds corruption, the initial answer would
be no. But let us pause and think for a
moment. The disadvantages of leaders
having power are that, the more power they have, the more they convert to
focusing on personal desires. The power
could also be used for unacceptable reasons - which would lead to yet more
corruption. But do not forget the
advantages, mind you. Having power could
make a leader more confident, assertive, and certain of decisions. So if action is needed, whatever it is gets
done. Someone might say that these
advantages could also be negative factors, which they could, so let us try
another angle. If there was no power,
there would be no authority. If there
was no authority, there would be a substantial increase in crime, meaning an
increase in theft, destroying of property, and assault. There would be disorder, and no one would
have to obey the law, as there would be no one to enforce it. Our country would then become dangerous, and filled
with chaos and controversy. Bad
conditions for workers, gambling out of control, flourishing black markets,
drugs, smuggling, foreign animal trading, you name it; we would have it. We would BE it. So now I ask you, do we want our leaders to
hold power?"Unlimited power is apt to corrupt the minds of those who possess it" - William Pitt. We cannot deny that this statement holds within it truth. Power corrupts. It is a fact of life. There have been, and will be, leaders who abuse their power. And honestly, what can we do about it? Some leaders definitely had the potential to be great; they could have helped themselves....but still some could not. Many did not have intentions of being corrupt when they started, but then again, some might have. Why must have these people used their power so irresponsibly? That we will probably never know. Should our leaders hold power? Yes. But balance is the key. Leaders should not hold absolute power and the people under him or her should always have some say. This is because if our voices are not heard, who knows where we will end up? We know power causes corruption. We know we cannot do much about it. But that does not mean we should not try.
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ReplyDeleteNot appropriate- Translation needed.Elaborate too please.
DeleteNicole
ReplyDeleteI like how your introduction uses varied stylistic techniques like the repetition of dictators,and questions. I also noticed how you took the topic and led your readers to the rephrased thesis in the form of a question at the end of your introduction. This is a sophisticated technique to use.
Some of the scenarios that you allude to may be made stronger with concrete examples.(in paragraph two)
I like how you present varied circumstances, both in everyday life and politically that power, lack of, abuse of, may affect us.
Nicole,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you worded your introduction. The writing was different then that of what you usually find in an essay and the message was very provocative and captured my attention the moment I read it.
Along the same lines as Ms. Lees' comment, you did a very good job explaining how people become corrupted and why, however I believe that the paragraph would have been a lot stronger if you added an example of the scenario that you had described.
As well, I like how you changed the font or italicized words in your essay in order to make them stand out and get your point across.It added a touch of personality to the writing.
As usual excellant work "ma amigo" :)
Nicole
ReplyDeleteThe writing style you used was very captivating; it drew my attention right from the beginning. The way you constructed your sentences created a serious atmosphere which showed the importance of what you were trying to say.
A thing I suggest you should do next time to improve your writing further, is to include an example of a situation or elaborate on the actions of some of the corrupted leaders you listed in the introduction.
I also liked that you included the benefits of having power, not just the negatives. It gave depth to your explanation and made it more than just a rant about how people always misuse power.
You did an amazing job on this. :)